I-0349: Grammatical/Typographical Corrections In Common Criteria V2.1

TYPE:                 Editorial Observation
NUMBER:               I-0349
STATUS:               Withdrawn
REASON:               This has been incorporated into CC v3.0.

TITLE:                Grammatical/Typographical Corrections In Common Criteria
                      V2.1

SOURCE REFERENCE:     CC v2.1 Part 2 Subclause 3.6 FAU_STG
                      CC v2.1 Part 2 Subclause C.6 FAU_STG
                      CC v2.1 Part 3 Clause 5 ASE
                      CC v2.1 Part 3 Subclause 5.8 ASE_TSS
RELATED TO:
     I-0422           Clarification Of ``Audit Records''

ISSUE:

Part 2 and Part 3 have a number of grammatical and typographical problems.

PROPOSED RESOLUTION

Not yet determined.

PROPOSED CRITERIA CHANGES

To address this interpretation, the following changes should be made in Part 2 and Part 3:

In the FAU_STG.3.1 element, remove the word "take" before the assignment.
The figure on Page 38 of the ASE requirements should refer to ASE, not APE.
In the FAU_STG.1.2 and FAU_STG.2.2 elements, insert the word "stored" before "audit records" for consistency with the .1 elements.
In Part 3, para 187 (Subclause 5.8), insert the word "to" before "be able", so the sentence reads "...in order to be able to clearly..."

SUPPORT:

This corrects a number of grammatical errors in the criteria.